Wednesday, 20 June 2018

My speech loom.

This is my loom about my speech and m y speech is about WHY KIDS BUNK SCHOOL!!!.
My goal is to get more people to listen to my work and for them to leave a comment about it.

Hope you like it.
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7 comments:

  1. Anonymous20 June 2018 at 14:22

    I love your speech and how it explains why students bunk school.

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    1. Anonymous21 June 2018 at 16:09

      Thanks Milan for the thoughtful comment.

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  2. Elle27 June 2018 at 11:36

    kia ora Ellie,
    I love your speech and how you explained why kids bunk school.
    You really explained it well and had a clear voice.
    Maybe next time use a back round on what you are saying.

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    1. Ellie27 June 2018 at 11:42

      Kia ora Elle

      Thanks for the comment I well adopt to what you have said.

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  3. Anonymous27 June 2018 at 11:47

    Hi Ellie
    I love the speech topic I think its a really good one.
    I wish I could here the Loom becuase its not working but other than thats its amazing

    Your welcome Alex

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    1. Anonymous3 July 2018 at 06:16

      Thanks Alex I cant get it to work

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  4. Anonymous6 September 2019 at 10:23

    This video is really good
    I liked the speech topic but sadly i
    couldn't hear the loom, but the rest
    was awesome.

    Ramari

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