Thursday, 4 July 2019

My Speech

Kia ora and welcome back to my blog.
I am about to show you my speech.
My speech is about how our future  is going to end.
Have your Teachers or Parents ever told you that your future is going to end?
How is It going to end you may ask!
Well take sometime and read my speech.
Please leave a comment, about what you think I shoud work on.

Here is my speech
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1.
Kia Ora my name is Ellie.
Have you ever taken one second to imagine what your future is going to be like?

2.
Well, I have a dream that in the future, I'm going to be a world famous rugby player.
That one day I'm going to be a master cook, and then the next I’m going to ride a great white shark for a living.

3.
 Oh yes doesn't my future sound amazing, full of hopes and dreams what about all those rainbows, butterflies and flowers.

4.
Well, it would be full of rainbows, butterflies and flowers if the world wasn't going to end, yes that's right humans have destroyed my future, crashed my hopes and dreams with your disrespectful and uncaring ways  for our wonderful planet.

5. You have infected the blood from all of the critters, humans and the living things  that walk on this earth. You've washed away my future with a tornado of plastic.
6. Yes humans are being greedy they are cutting down over 7 billion trees to make room for bigger and flasher buildings, you are getting more toys and video games that you

7.only play with once, buying bigger flasher cars to be better than everyone else but actually those cars are creating more greenhouse gasses, causing Icebergs to melt.

9.You! Your purched there all silent and innocent but you're the cause of this. Every time you ask your parents for a Big Mac from McDonald's,or when you go to the store to get staff just so u can sit their and play video games
8.All these problems add up to one thing, the end of my dreams, flooding my future, killing my butterflies, snatching the flowers from my garden of hope and who do I blame for this?

10.You are taking me one step closer to death. Hang on, what's that I see can, you see it, it’s a speck of hope and that hope is telling us that we can change. Change the way we act, change the way we think, change the way we live.

11.No more waiting for others to make the change… you as people could be responsible for the death of my future..

12. or you could save my future. Think about it people if my future is washed away, by the thing that people call living then, what will happen to yours?


I am going to do a blog post with me telling my speech with a slide.

2 comments:

  1. Hello Ellie. My name is Andrew and I'm from Otaki College. I really liked your speech that you have written and I believe you in how people are destroying the earth and what we need to do about it. On one of the paragraphs though the text goes onto a different paragraph maybe change that(:

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  2. Thx Drew I well go have a look at your blog now.

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